I see! you gotta lot of things to change here mate :)I agree with Ryan, color combo is not good.as Arnei2311 said, it doesn't give 'pop'so, how you improve it..-Change the base font-The background should not be grunge as the text has class look. Make BG lil' glossy and shiny-Try different purple and pink shades instead of red and green-Decrease opacity and play with fill, try some transparent parts in between textStill, I admire it...I cannot think of an easy way to make this text out, can you help me?